Australia Synthesis

Here is an excerpt from JC's paper.  What are its strengths?  How could he empower it?

"In Coreggio Jones by Victor G Daley, cultural identity is put into questions because of colonization.  Colonization can have a heavy burden on the native people, especially the view that they have of themselves.  When colonists come to Aboriginal land and say that they're better while also proving it by suppressing Aboriginal people and values, it's only natural to have several Aborigines start to feel the same way.  As Victor G. Daley writes in Coreggio Jones, 'Coreggio Jones an artist was, O pure Australian race, But native subjects scorned because, / They were too commonplace.'  Coreggio himself thought of his homeland as something that was effectively boring.  Colonization destroyed his cultural sense of identity and replaced it with a new one in their image.  This creates strong conflict not only between the native Aborigines who still believe in their values but also now between the Aborigines themselves and those who stay loyal to their land and those who do not.  Again as Victor G. Daley writes in Coreggio Jones, 'He will not see that our sky-hue, Old Italy's outvies, but still goes yearning for the blue, of far Ausonian skies ... He is yet painting at full bat, You'll say, if him you see, 'His body dwells on Gander Flats, His soul's in Italy.'  While Coreggio is of the Aboriginal people, he at heart believes himself Italian and this is because of colonization.  Colonization creates the idea of inadequacy among the native people such as the Aborigines and makes an already hard fight harder."