Monday, April 13, 2015

More Latin America 2

Here is an excerpt from WSc's paper.  What are its strengths?  How could he empower it?

"In 'One of these Days,' Garcia Marquez creates a metaphor for the Latin American people in the form of the dentist.  He paints a picture of a simple man who wants to keep to himself and live his life.  The man whom Garcia describes sounds like an old farmer, a worker in a rural area.  He wakes early and sets to work, working hard and steadily at his job, polishing the false teeth and arranging his office.  The man looks at the simple things in life, whether it will rain before lunch and looking at the birds outside of his window. His office lays plain and bare, being 'a poor office: an old wooden chair, the pedal drill, a glass case with ceramic bottles.'   He cares not for what is happening in the town or what the important people are doing.  He stays to himself and concentrates on his place in society.  The dentist can be interpreted as the poor, a man who is different in almost every way from the upper class, which was a great portion of the common Latin American population.  The mayor is also a metaphor for the upper class.  The mayor comes with the need to have his infected tooth removed, and he wants it done quickly.  The dentist, seemingly uninterested and apathetic towards the mayor, continues on with what he was doing, not reacting to the mayor's threats that he would shoot him if he did not do his job.  He merely replies that he will come and shoot the mayor himself.  The mayor resembles a foreign power, similar to the US in most situations.  The foreign power comes in wanting something; the Latin American state says that they are busy and don't want America there.  America threatens them; Latin America fights back, and the whole thing leads to a painful experience for America and a hostile remaining relationship."

5 comments:

  1. Will's understanding of the piece itself and his ideas in the beginning of his argument are reasonable and easy to follow. I liked how he used the metaphors to further his piece. However, I disagree in that the metaphors represented nations on the whole; rather, I think the mayor-dentist contrast was just that, a comparison between the rich and poor of Latin America.

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    1. I think that that could may as well be a good way to interpret the passage. However, I chose this way to show the similarity between the US' actions in Nicuragua and the passage so I could further better my essay.

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  2. Will's explanation of a metaphor with another metaphor, in this instance, happens to be effective as he makes it more relatable. I feel though, that he could have explained it a little more seeing as how a double metaphor is somewhat complex. I love his incorporation of indirect and direct citation as examples in the first part of the paragraph but, I feel that he diverges as he explains the meaning of the mayor in two pretty different ways. Besides that confusing discrepancy though, Will made an effective argument.

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  3. Will did well in this passage but i feel like it is too complex. Much like the author in the essay we wrote today said, simple and familiar writing is better and i cant help but feel like Will was complex and used three words when he should have used one. The writing could have been more to the point and thus more effective in conveying his thesis.

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    1. I disagree CV. I think that because of how complicated the story and the metaphor was, will should remain consistent with that. The complexity helps the passage retain consistency. I think that the writing would have been vague of it was more terse.

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